In the great design of things you'll secure a B+ just for effort and hard work. Where exactly you actually lost us was first in all the specifics. You know, as the maxim goes, details make or break the argument.. And that could not be more correct at this point. Having said that, let me say to you precisely what did deliver the results. Your text is definitely rather convincing and this is probably the reason why I am making an effort in order to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. 2nd, even though I can easily notice a leaps in logic you come up with, I am not confident of just how you seem to connect your details which inturn produce the conclusion. For the moment I shall subscribe to your point however trust in the future you actually link the dots much better.