In the great design of things you actually secure an A+ just for effort and hard work. Where exactly you actually confused everybody was on your particulars. As it is said, details make or break the argument.. And it could not be more true in this article. Having said that, let me inform you exactly what did do the job. The article (parts of it) is actually rather convincing and this is possibly the reason why I am making the effort to opine. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, whilst I can see the jumps in reasoning you make, I am not necessarily confident of exactly how you seem to unite the details which inturn make your conclusion. For right now I will subscribe to your point but wish in the near future you actually connect your dots much better.